The image for this week's inspiration..
After some play...
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She wondered if they would ever leave her head.
Filling every space
Is there any room
to live, to dream;
Taking her breath away.
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She wondered why he left.
Filling every space
Is there any room
without pain, without emptiness;
Breaking her heart in two.
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She wondered when the pain would leave.
Filling every space
Is there any room
taking time, taking hope;
Causing such despair.
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She wondered how she lived,
Filling every space
Is there any room
without his ideas, without his plans;
Crowding any dreams she did have.
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SueAnn @2012
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Have a creative and imaginative day!
Hugging you
SueAnn
Have a creative and imaginative day!
Hugging you
SueAnn
14 comments:
great focus and use of image to promote your theme
The repetition works terrifically well here. Difficult thing to do with - the loss of someone who had perhaps been overly dominant to begin with. k.
The repetition works terrifically well here. Difficult thing to do with - the loss of someone who had perhaps been overly dominant to begin with. k.
nice use of repetition...will it ever go away...not completely i dont think but it might dull...
Hopefully her own ideas and plans will bloom...
There are depths in you . . . . .
Sort of sad and romantic this image you create.
Well done. Repetition works well for you here, especially the "Filling every space."
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Oh, this hits home, especially the last verse. Thank you for sharing this SueAnn.
So true - it’s difficult to shake off those pictures your mind and dreams, and the repetition underscores the heratbreak.
So true - it’s difficult to shake off those pictures your mind and dreams, and the repetition underscores the heratbreak.
How well your vision of image and words work together here - clever lady! :)
I really enjoyed this!!
I like the repetition...and what you did with the art!
=)
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